Video feedback/learner response

Teacher Feedback:

Great title!
Really good choice of song and parallel section works perfectly-great section of classic clips too!
Contrapuntal section works but i wonder if it could have signalled the switch a little more clearly
Some great editing touches-the gunshot into the bridge explosion at the end particularly good

Class Feedback:

Good song choice
Matched very well to clips
Amazing editing
Better variety of scenes
Clear for when the parallel changed to contrapuntal

WWW: I think that my editing of the clips went really well and fit to the briefing to create a video with parallel and contrapuntal scenes, while also the choice of music allowed me to clearly establish the happy go lucky vibe i was trying to create at the start to compare and contrast to the more 'gory' and unpleasant scenes in the contrapuntal section.

EBI: I could have used a larger variety of scenes that did not all come from the walking dead and i could have made the transition from parallel to contrapuntal much clearer than i might have first expected it to be.

4. I think that cassius' was one of the best as it definitely created that distinction between the contrapuntal and parallel and the scenes used were really enjoyable to watch with the music of i like to move it move it.

5. I have found that through the use of diegetic, non-diegetic, parallel and contrapuntal uses of sound that different themes and connotations can be crafted in order to portray a certain feeling, atmosphere, narrative and even setting/time period allowing for the audience to fully immerse themselves within a text through its use of sound.

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Magazine first rough

Front Double page spread Extra page

Print brief research and planning

Brief Print You should create four pages from a music magazine – specifically: a front cover featuring the artist/band promoted in Task One a two-page interview with the artist/band one page with content relevant to the magazine and the target audience. The magazine targets a mainstream music audience . The front cover and interview can use some images from the same photoshoot but other original images should also be used that offer some visual variety. The interview should be used to promote the tour and the music track. It should also reinforce the brand image of the artist/band and integrate some reference to the footwear manufacturers who are sponsoring the band/artist. What do you need to produce? 1) The front page (A4 portrait) for a new, original music magazine aimed at a mainstream audience that you have created: Title and masthead - DY (Discordant Youth) Selling line (slogan) - ( Rising star/Revolutionising what it means to ...

Rough draft feedback

Estimated current grade: C Comments & feedback: There are some very nice moments here – the artist branding is excellent (in fact, you should make more of it!) and the narrative/performance crossover basically works. Some of the performance shots are really good and the simple narrative is satisfying. The challenge now is to look over the structure of the three minutes and also think about whether it’s worth shooting or re-shooting any of the sections. You have a shot of the Converse shoes (very briefly) but I wonder if that element of the brief is something you could make more of? Is there any way you could tie it into the narrative at all? The performance element – the close-ups and moving camera are good but the wide shot with the backdrop not covering the whole shot. Deliberate? Lip syncing (and guitar syncing) is not quite on it – is that a performance or editing thing? This wil...

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