1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. • Loads to credit here – the second half in particular has some brilliant moments. The ‘golden hour’ sunshine and timing/lighting is beautiful – did you try a bit of slow motion in there too? • Opening shot/performance element is largely well-synched but not sure on framing and location. Can you re-shoot in a rehearsal studio? Could you get a band behind you? This could make a real difference. • Footwear shot is great! I would cross-cut between the two sections though? • Think about how to end up with the 3 minutes – I wonder if you do need the opening? • Needed brand identity of your artist in there – that was part of the brief for the preliminary exercise. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. WWW: I had crea...
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