1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher. Absolutely outstanding - I loved it! Superbly creative interpretation of the brief, excellent labelling of shots and angles/movement Sound and mise-en-scene also excellent. superb work! 2) Type up your feedback from fellow students. Great labelling Good camera shots/angles/use of environment Great Actors/sounds/editing Good narrative/creative Some actors laughing (Perfect) 3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs. WWW: Labelled all the camera angles/shots and movements really well Creative use of mise-en-scene to create narrative Really good editing that amplified the comedic qualities EBI: Need challenge myself even more to use angles in more creative ways Be a better director (actors laughing) Have it meet the brief exactly at 1 minute 4) L earner response: think about what you learned about cinematography...
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