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Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Research - 5
music video - 4
language - 4
representations - 3
audience and industry - 5
delivery - 5
Total - 26

  • Superb, confident introduction - love the key words/ideas that sum up the video.
  • description of the video in terms of tone, colour is lovely. Converse sponsor perfect too
  • Nostalgia culture concept is excellent, perhaps a little too much text on screen but linking to representation works really well.
  • Camera shots - all fair points but for statement of intent you'll need to discuss actual shots and their meaning.
  • clear thought into casting, costume, colour grading excellent planning
  • audience addressed impressively across multiple slides including demographics and pleasures
  • industry contexts spot on - clearly researched and brilliantly justified
  • love the magazine title! not much planning beyond that element but I like the honesty and there is also limited time in the ignite format.

Q&A
  • opening Q on narrative is helpful - confidently answered and justified
  • excellent answer on mainstream/genre - useful question
  • superb handling of Q&A outstanding presentation 

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: I clearly established my idea and the thoughts and intentions behind what i would like to do for my music video and magazine, defining how my concept fits the brief and elaborating on the social contexts that I would like present for the enjoyability of the audience. 

EBI: I could have expanded more on my magazine and the types of things I would include within it while also making my slides less wordy and have more in terms of camera shots to create different representations within my video.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I believe that I am happy with how my concept has come out and will continue to pursue making what i had described within my presentation but i will have to change a few things in my statement of intent such as adding camera shots and why I'm using them but also changing up a few sentences to include why I believe Indie/Alt rock is mainstream. I think that overall my concept fits completely into the brief and I will be able to get the resources I need without a problem. I will also be adding more theory and media terminology to my statement of intent as I remember that some of the best presentations had well thought out theorists to back up their concepts.

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