Mark: 6 Grade: C Comments for AQA: This is a clear statement of intent that offers a good concept that matches the music video / music magazine brief. It targets the specified audience appropriately and shows a certain authority with regards to industry contexts. Media language elements are considered although perhaps lacking specific details in places. It is not clear exactly what the three-minute video will include aside from certain camera shots and a VHS video effect. Narrative isn’t entirely clear. Representation is weaker and keeps this from the top levels. Brief mention of youth and London but not developed. Application of theory and discussion of stereotypes could push this towards the higher levels. Audience is addressed impressively with audience pleasures a particular strength. Application of more audience theory could push this to the top level. Digital convergence is touched on in print sectio...
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